Which sentence best emphasizes the perspective of the audience and the 'you'view? Unfortunately, you will not be able to use our computer and telephone systems on Thursday afternoon because of updates to both systems. Computer and telephone services will be unavailable on Thursday afternoon. Service will be restored as soon as possible. We apologize for the inconvenience, but your computer and telephone services will be interrupted on Thursday afternoon while upgrades are completed. To offer you better computer and telephone service those systems will be down on Thursday afternoon while upgrades are being installed

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Which sentence best emphasizes the perspective of the audience and the 'you'view? Unfortunately, you will not be able to use our computer and telephone systems on Thursday afternoon because of updates to both systems. Computer and telephone services will be unavailable on Thursday afternoon. Service will be restored as soon as possible. We apologize for the inconvenience, but your computer and telephone services will be interrupted on Thursday afternoon while upgrades are completed. To offer you better computer and telephone service those systems will be down on Thursday afternoon while upgrades are being installed

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The sentence that best emphasizes the audience's perspective and the "you" view is: **To offer you better computer and telephone service, those systems will be down on Thursday afternoon while upgrades are being installed.**This option leads with the direct benefit to the user ("better computer and telephone service") and uses "you" directly. It frames the downtime as something being done *for* the user, rather than something happening *to* them.

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